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Lord_Data
09-11-2002, 11:54 PM
Thomas Jefferson and The Declaration of Independence

Two years before the ratification of The Declaration of Independence Thomas Jefferson wrote the manuscript known as A Summary View of the Rights of British America. The summary contains one large difference from the declaration. It speaks mostly of free trade and the rights of the whole rather than individual freedoms and natural freedoms. The summary also is a bit longer and more repetitive.
Free trade and an open market is a very important idea in America. Jefferson proves how Britain tried to take this idea away from the people by enacting a number of taxes on goods such as tea, paper and stamps. He explains in great detail how this limited who the colonies could trade with. This is his focus point in A Summary View of the Rights of British America. He repeats this idea many times throughout the manuscript in as many ways as possible. Why does he do this? He is writing for the common man and what better way to emphasize a point than repetition?
The summary is a manuscript written two years before The Declaration of Independence; however several of the main elements of freedom and independence that are contained in The Declaration of Independence are certainly evident. Jefferson does not concentrate on them and does not include much evidence to support these issues. He discusses only one other issue in detail and that is the freedom to govern as an independent nation.



laugh it up i am a dumbass

eiraena
09-12-2002, 12:20 PM
what's wrong with it? i am so stupid i missed something? otherwise it sounds good to me.

Obinice
05-10-2004, 11:13 AM
Indeed I know this post is old, but aside from it being short which I see nothing wrong with, whats up with it? Does anyone know....seems fine to me. But I know nothing of the topic.

Ender
05-19-2004, 10:33 PM
im lost, whats wrong with it? i should use that for my english class...........lol.......*glances around nervously* he........he........

Raven
05-19-2004, 11:07 PM
That was good. What are you talking about? No one is stupid. Don't think that about yourself, okay?? Even though I absolutely HATE history...it was well written. :)

Obinice
05-20-2004, 09:28 AM
Also note that that post was made a loooooooong time ago.